Title: KINGSDAUGHTER
Category/Genre: Adult Fantasy
Word Count: 94,000
Pitch: The Kingsdaughter’s only chance to keep her country together: invite every warrior to a tournament. Champion gets the throne. Magic armor hides her face; they won’t know she’s in the fight until she’s won.
I'll be honest... I like the idea behind the pitch much more than the pitch. I wanted to see more of the conflict and why she has to become queen. Yes, I know, hard to do in 35 words! However, now my curiosity is piqued and I'm hoping the depth of conflict is there.
ReplyDeleteFingers crossed my hunch on this plays out. Please send along the full query and first three chapters. Put the title of your piece and "pitchmas" in the subject line and send to:
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ReplyDeleteThanks!